26 Ekim 2013 Cumartesi

On a suuny day , a cat woke up . (simple sentence)
He was hungry. (simple sentence )
While he was walking around , he saw a dove which made his mouth watery. (complex sentence)
He made a lot of plans because he was starving.(complex sentence)
He tried to climb the nest and he reached his aim.(Compound Sentence)
But he couldn't find the dove in the nest..(compound sentence)
He started to wait it while the dove was flying happily in the air and tried to find meal.(compound+complex sentence)
The cat saw the dove and tried to fly like dove but he failed and unfortunately he died.(compound+complex )



                                    Infinite Root of Happiness     :   Seda Asil
                                                                                    Merve Çağlar
                                                                                    Furkan Atmaca

1 yorum:

  1. Dear Infinite Root of Happiness,
    Thank you for the story. It is quite revealing.It is a bit sad but funny as well. In terms of the sentence types, I think you need to revise your second compound sentence. In order to make it a compound sentence you need to link two independent clauses with a coordinating conjunction. It seems in the story there is only one independent clause.. Also, the last sentence in the story is a compound not a compound-complex. In order to make it so, you need to add one subordinating conjunction (such as "because", "as ", while" to it.
    Keep up the good work,

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